万学海文名师墨东博2009年考研考前作文押题_新闻大滚动_教育

万学海文名师墨东博2009年考研考前作文押题

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As is illustrated/depicted /conveyed/revealed/betrayed/shown in the picture, (图的内容原则上用一个主从句表达, 功底.两句合一句的途经,1 AND连结2 WHICH或WHEREAS 连结3 非谓语 )the two pet neighbors greet each other politely and amicably ,whereas (=WHILE/ON THE OTHER HAND)the two pets’ owners seem to ignore each other. Simple as it is, the drawing renders us pondering awefully. (凑字数,其富余时,可省去)Accordingly, what this far-reaching/thought-provoking picture depicts reflects a common phenomenon in today’s society:(反映的现实) pets, rather than/instead of people around them, are such an indispensable part in their daily life to the point where (加以讲解) they are excessively/inordinately(负面词汇,作者的态度尽在不言中,回避使用 I BELIVE,I THINK 之类的句式) fond of their beloved animals while neglecting those who care them, which has aroused great concern and should be given enough consideration. It goes without saying that its symbolic meaning that (主题句,尽量避免使用1 主系表 2 THERE BE结构主张使用下列句型,1 NOTHING+BE+ADJ+THAN+TO+DO 2 ON NO ACCOUNT CAN WE 3 IT IS TIME +S +V-ED 4 IT 无主句) indifference should be cleared up among people, with the harmonious society echoed vigorously nowadays in China ought to be weighed /taken/pondered seriously./earnestly/conscientiously

Why do we lay emphasis on this(指代词表过渡) several points(名词复数,总分总的标志) analyzed below might equip us with the deeper understanding of what we are heading for. For one thing,(分述标志词) since we have to live on an on-the-move lifestyle , we are denied chances to share our feelings with our friends and relatives. For another (分述标志词), with so many dishonesties going around in our life and then indifference occurring, we might have no choice but to enjoy the company of pets. And above all(分述标志词), too many tragedies - seeing someone in mortal danger without lifting a finger to save him- put on the stage in our daily life almost everyday, No better illustration of this idea touched on above can be maintained/taken/weighed than the case as listed below,( 例证)a crowd of people remained appallingly nonchalance(=indifference,论据是论点的具体体现,主题核心词汇重复) to the plea of a mother, since she failed to offer the required amount of cash as a price to save her drowning son, the woman at last watched her son sink to death.. Consequently/Accordingly/On balance/Therefore/It follows that, no issue in china is as basic to build up the society in harmony as ironing out indifference among people.(此句为小节,1 与TS首尾呼应,重复原则grow out of=clear up 2 为第三段起势)

Judging from what has been argued above, people have come to realize the harms of indifference has been , like Pandora’s box, the crippling force of establishing the harmony society. It is , therefore, necessary that some effective steps be made to(点主题重复原则) narrow and bridge the gap among people. To begin with,(以法治国) the government should make law to establish the society in which people live in harmony. In addition,(以德治国) people should enhance the awareness of concern and care each other especially. Only by undergoing these measures, can we make our society, where people ,even not knowing each other, help among them ,appeal to everyone.

As is illustrated/depicted /conveyed/revealed/betrayed/shown in the picture, (图的内容原则上用一个主从句表达, 功底.两句合一句的途经,1 AND连结2 WHICH或WHEREAS 连结3 非谓语 )a lady and a gentleman are watching an artificial scene on the top of a building with numerous tower blocks surrounding them. (=WHILE/ON THE OTHER HAND) Simple as it is, the drawing sets us thinking too much. (凑字数,其富余时,可省去)Accordingly, what this far-reaching/thought-provoking picture depicts is a common phenomenon in today’s society,(反映的现实) too many man-made projects such as skyscrapers have excessively been built, whereas too much natural resources including afforested land has vanished appallingly. (加以讲解) (负面词汇,作者的态度尽在不言中,回避使用 I BELIVE,I THINK 之类的句式). There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning that (主题句,尽量避免使用1 主系表 2 THERE BE结构主张使用下列句型,1 NOTHING+BE+ADJ+THAN+TO+DO 2 ON NO ACCOUNT CAN WE 3 IT IS TIME +S +V-ED 4 IT 无主句)it is imperative to check the blind actions and activities of human beings in the urban development ,with nowadays values of scientific development echoed vigorously .

why do we lay emphasis on this(指代词表过渡) ? several points(名词复数,总分总的标志) analyzed below might help us gain an insight into the dramatic change to which we have been qualified to bear witness. To begin with,(分述标志词) over the past decades, much arable land has been destroyed in the rush for rapid urban development. Such blind development has damaged the natural balance to the point where people only live in a box of lifeless cement and steel. What is more, most people still lack the concept of scientific development. Some urban planners and designers focus their attention simply on their immediate interests and problems ,which has in turn degraded wrethchedly the quality of our living environment. As many famous ecologists point out that a cluster of high-rise buildings in a city often overburden living capacities, which once could afford to residents enough.( 例证) Consequently/Accordingly/On balance/Therefore/It follows that, no issue in china is as basic to give an expression to inherent spirit of scientific development as restraint unbridled urban development.(此句为小节,1 与TS首尾呼应,重复原则)

Judging from what have been argued above, people have come to realize the harms arising from indiscriminate development has been, like the Pandora’s box, the crippling force of following the values of scientific development. It is , therefore, necessary that some effective steps be made to(点主题重复原则) lay much emphasis on the harms from blind development at the expense of the balance of ecosystem . To begin with,(以法治国) the government should make law to channel construction to the track of values of scientific development , for, if not, our descendants would be thrown into unexpected crises. In addition,(以德治国) people should enhance the awareness that environmental problems can not be separated from those of human welfare and from the process of economic development in general. Only by undergoing these measures, can we make our society, where birds are singing and flowers are giving forth their fragrance here and there, appeal to everyone.

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As is illustrated/depicted /conveyed/revealed/betrayed/shown in the picture, the two disabled persons whose crippled legs are bound together do a lot of traveling. Simple as it is, the drawing sets us thinking too much. Accordingly, what this far-reaching picture depicts reflects a common phenomenon in today’s society: the people in our society who are in the dark want to turn the corner but they can not succeed by themselves respectively and in turn they have to choose to pull together in times of trouble It goes without saying that its symbolic meaning that no matter what difficulties we may face when we work or study we should help each other, with the harmonious society echoed vigorously nowadays in China.

Why do we lay emphasis on this? Several points analyzed below might equip us with the deeper understanding of what we are heading for. On one hand, since we have to live on an on-the-move lifestyle, we may encounter this or that plight, where we would be at a loss to do anything other than to need others assistance. On the other hand, if we do not offer help each other when we confront dilemma we would not realize our dream.. No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the case as listed below, 69 people were caught in an unfortunate mine accident in Henan province several months ago, they survived incredibly owing to their mutual help at last.. Consequently, no issue in china is as basic to build up the society in harmony as coordination in face of disaster

Judging from what have been argued above, people have come to realize the values of mutual aid has been the driving force of establishing the harmony society. It is , therefore, necessary that some effective steps be made to advocate spirit of supporting each other To begin with, the government should make law to encourage people to unite together to overcome difficulties. In addition, people should enhance the awareness of caring each other especially when they were young. Only by undergoing these measures, can we make our society, where people, even not knowing each other, help among them ,appeal to everyone.

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As is illustrated in the picture, a student is surfing on the net bar who, even after midnight, is still playing cyber games, while the text books scatter on the desk. Simple as it is, the picture really sets us thinking.. Accordingly, the fact that students being on the rise spent their spare time playing computer games such as CS has aroused great concern and should be given enough consideration. There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning that it is imperative to prevent them from indulging in CG ought to be taken seriously.

To account for the above-mentioned case, several effects arisen from CG should be put forward. To begin with , taking to CG too much impair players’ health especially eyes, just like being betrayed in the picture. In addition, students on line often pretend to be what they want to be and cheat each other. Moreover, the growing number of students neglect their studies, idle away their time and even commit crimes thanks to CG., which is threatening situation we are unwilling to see. No better illustration of this idea mentioned before can be thought than the example as listed below, a student, who wanted to play CG but had little money , hence, made a reckless move to waylay and rob. CG, in some sense, is just like Pandora’s box, which gives rise to some undesirable results unexpectedly. Therefore, no issue is as crucial to individual and national survival and prosperity as bringing CG under control in China.

Obviously, from what have been argued above, if we are blind to this problem, those who are experiencing these problems will be exposed to danger. it is necessary that some effective steps be carried out to check CG. On one hand, it is demanding for the government to make law to ban CG full of sex and violence on sale. On the other hand, we should assume our responsibilities and spare no effort to bring home people the awareness of harms concerning CG. Only by undergoing these measures, can we make our youths live in healthy life style, which has just gone to the heart of building up the cordial society .

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