【例题解析】
There are advantage for students to work while 76._________________
studying at school. One of them was that 77._________________
they can earn money. For the most part, 78._________________
students working to earn money for their own 79._________________
use. Earning their own money allow them 80._________________
to spend on anything as if they please. 81._________________
They would have to ask their parents for 82._________________
money or for permission to do things by 83._________________
the money. Some students may also save 84._________________
up for our college or future use. 85._________________
1.通读一遍，理解文章。搞清文章讲述的是学生自己挣钱的好处。注意文章的逻辑关系，时态、人称、主谓、指代等方面是否一致。可以发现82行上下文逻辑有错误，应在would后加not；77行中的时态和整篇文章的事态不一致，应将was改为is；80行主谓不一致，动名词做主语谓语用单数，应将allow改为allows； 85行代词的指代不一致，主语为三人称的复数形式，指代的物主代词应为their。
2.逐句改错，注意热点。76行是名词的单复数误用，应将advantage改为advantages；79行本句中没有谓语应用动词的谓语形式而不是非谓语形式，应将working改为work； 81行as sb. please应为惯用法。84行情态动词后用动词原形。83行为介词的错用，具体用什么工具或东西应用介词with。
3.再次通读，检查答案和符号。
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